Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Line One

Sometimes the deepest
meaning is no meaning
in flat land.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

You need more emoetry:

The oppressing nimbus bears down on my heart, proudly defecating its unwanted debris over my fractured soul and destroying the last shred of dignity I have within. I open up and accept this profoundly tragic fate, seeing that there is no other chance, love, or joy for me in this world. I open up wide and take in the vile byproducts of this monstrous demon, and feel them sear my flesh as they flow over my already damaged psyche. Hoping for a quick end, I open up wider, but the pain only worsens... and I grimace.

Drook said...

ok how's this? actually its a few years old, just a piece of something :

if water had a memory would it remember--in me
the silence kept
in fired eyes
(cracked and breaking)